Subject: | The Attrition of Submission |
From: | Christopher W. Thomas (creatician@poetic.com) |
Host: | 207-172-227-114.s51.as1.dnb.erols.com |
Date: | Mon May 18, 1998 at 4:18PM |
Too much done, too little return
So few words, so many churns
At the gut - twisted and so tight
So few verses, not done right
Wanting it to be well-received
But now - heart, slowly, bleeds
Worn away from multi-rejections
Continuous, since the inception
And now - feathers are ruffled ...
As thoughts are carefully muffled
As concern over further submission
Overcomes need to be part of system
- Tristram
(c) Christopher W. Thomas
4pm Monday May 18th, 1998