Subject: It's Over ...
From: Christopher W. Thomas (creatician@poetic.com)
Host: dnb-as1s47.erols.com
Date: Thurs Dec 18, 1997 at 5:40PM

It's done, it's over ... another submission in clover

Worked at it so hard ... my mind's turned to lard
So much playing with words, in order to be heard
Pull them from here - and put them over there

Make it all jell together ... slide them into tether
Rephrase the lines - so they all get into a climb
Rearrange the order - doing it will make it broader
This time's gonna work ... I feel it ... it'll perk

So much good thought - expressed in a way caught
Up in shining images ... so many - there are scrimmages
Going on in my brain ... words with the power of trains
Shunting back and forth their freight - this time, not late

Registered and postmarked two days ahead ... no lead
In my feet over this little endeavor ... done me a favor
Now I just have to sit and wait ... four months to the date
A nice bundle it'll be ... want to be respected, and free

Of the harassment and cheekiness ... really do deserve less
My mind is a whirlpool of thought ... time has been bought
So much more to write now ... there will be new plows
Into farmlands where I'll harvest yet ... some of my very best

- tristram
5:35pm Thurs 12/18/97